Following the great feedback I got was fairly easy. Everyone was very descriptive of both what they liked, and what they thought I should change and improve upon. A lot of the peer feedback I got focused on how the middle segment of my video story was a little too long. I included too much basketball footage so I decided to cut a lot of it out, almost thirty seconds worth which gave me a lot of time to do a conclusion and still be in the time requirements. My peers thought that the story of the piece fit in nicely with my topic for the year, which is my family and what life has been like for me this year. I liked with this project how I didn’t have to give visual focus on myself in order to tell a goofy story about something that is important to me, which was something my peers liked as well. Some other feedback I got suggested that I edit the audio for my interview towards the end so it is more even with my voice. It took a lot of time and editing by after playing around with the program, keynotes, and some audio effects I finally got it to the point where it sounded pretty good without having to redo the interview and go through the same process again, because I would just end up editing any audio I had to make it sound more even and clear. The song I used during the basketball footage has a free to share, remix, and transform license and I thought the beat and tempo went well with my shots. It wasn’t the song I originally wanted to use, but it worked well (my original choice was taken down off soundcloud after I asked the person who supposedly made it if I could use the track). In order to further expand on the story and explain how the project ties into my topic, I added a conclusion to add more explanation. I didn’t want to change the footage or my opening voice over because I like how it represented the tone of the game with my brothers. I thought it was cool that we could do something goofy but also tell a story. I think the conclusion enhanced the story and helped out a little bit which is really important. I also think that by removing some of the basketball footage and shortening it also added to the story because not so much time was spent on just pure basketball stuff, but more the purpose of the piece, which is also the interview and now my conclusion. As for effects and transitions, I mostly used dip to black between shots because it fit the tempo and tone of most of the shots well, but when more flair was needed I used and iris or dissolve effect. When some parts of the audio sounded too loud or too quiet I used keynotes and a few dissolve effects to make them fit better together as well. I got a lot of great feedback which is so nice because this project was really challenging, because if you had a good video shot, bad volume or audio could ruin it and make you need to redo it. This took a lot of patience and effort, but I am really happy with how it turned out and every time I show my family they laugh a lot and love it! Thanks!
Also thanks to Minor Threat Recordings for listing the background music under the free to share and remix CC license! Here’s the link to where I got the song.
• Over the past year since ive been at college away from home more, my ranking withing the family men has been left open. My two younger brothers have been fighting to move into the second in command spot only under my dad. They decided to settle things on the concrete.
• Eventually ask lily questions about why things have been hard on her.
• Get lots of b role for opening intro before basketball shots
• Clearly basketball wasn’t their strongsuit, maybe they can settle this paramount feud over
• Over the past year, my home and family have had to deal with turmoil due to my absence and being away at college. The vacancy of the third in command only behind my mom and dad has been tough on the whole family. Recently, both my youngers hayden and taylor have been vying to capitalize on the open position. Political instability has decimated family morale. They both decided to settle the stalemate once and for all. It was my moral obligation to record this battle royale for the record books as they settle things on the concrete.
• I’ll have a post-game interview with Hayden asking him how he will feel about his new position as second dominant male in the house. He should be ecstatic. Who knows what he will say.
Would you say that you and your older brother Taylor have a rivalry?
Where did you get your basketball skills?
How did you feel about that sweet yam and comeback?
What do you think the chances are we see you in the draft?
Would you say that you and your older brother Taylor have a rivalry?
Do you think your performance moved you ahead of Taylor in the family rankings?
Do you see the family getting back on track?
This whole year my focus has been on my family and how it is important for me to be close with them. As much as this is a goofy power struggle between my brothers, it is also a representation of what every day is like for us. As my first year of college comes to a close and summer begins, more of my days will be spent with my family fooling around and enjoying each other’s company. Hayden may have beat Taylor this time, but when they team up against me, I’m the one who always wins.
Time Visual Audio
about 0:00 – :20 opening intro of what the video is about/visuals of taylor and hayden B-roll my voice. Explaining situation/light opening music
:26 first still shot of hayden. Visually representing him Background song- “I Told You Tammy Its Mine!” Kid Sneelock- Minor Threat Recordings
:41 video of taylors introduction Background song- “I Told You Tammy Its Mine!” Kid Sneelock- Minor Threat Recordings
:47 fade out of intro to video shots of story Background song- “I Told You Tammy Its Mine!” Kid Sneelock- Minor Threat Recordings
:53 taylor takes hayden to the rack Background song- “I Told You Tammy Its Mine!” Kid Sneelock- Minor Threat Recordings
1:04 feet shot of taylor balling Background song- “I Told You Tammy Its Mine!” Kid Sneelock- Minor Threat Recordings
1:09 Hayden Deep Shot Background song- “I Told You Tammy Its Mine!” Kid Sneelock- Minor Threat Recordings
1:13 Hayden gets stuffed Background song- “I Told You Tammy Its Mine!” Kid Sneelock- Minor Threat Recordings
1:18 hayden takes taylor to the rack Background song- “I Told You Tammy Its Mine!” Kid Sneelock- Minor Threat Recordings
1:19 slow motion rising up Background song- “I Told You Tammy Its Mine!” Kid Sneelock- Minor Threat Recordings
1:23 hayden hanging after dunk Background song- “I Told You Tammy Its Mine!” Kid Sneelock- Minor Threat Recordings
2:00 Hayden post-game interview ask him about his performance and what not Background song- “I Told You Tammy Its Mine!” Kid Sneelock- Minor Threat Recordings
2:30 wrap up- conclusion- explain purpose a little more. Still shots of family no audio
2:35 wrap up image and rolling title- directed by, song by, and thanks will be here